Next Tuesday is my 13th birthday, at the dawn of this day, I am hopeful, and thought always thinging hopefully that: what gift my father what this will send a gift to me this?and what food mother would cook for me give me what good food does ?, etc.. (無比艱辛的改完了，說下你的問題：你是現在滿懷希望的想所以不可用過去式，而 be always doing sth句型常常用來表示一直持續的現在時動作。另外要注意句型的用法，萬不可用中國式英語）
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