【習作要求】
馬虎搞到兩張全興隊對國安隊的足球比賽入場券。他電話通知好友趙華洋，約他放學后在新華公園門口碰頭，一起吃晚飯，然後去看球賽。二人在飯店美美吃了一頓，到付賬時馬虎才發現自己把錢夾忘在了家裡，入場券也在他的錢夾中。
【學生習作】
Ma Hu got two tickets of (1) a wonderful football match between Quanxing and Guoan. He was thinking of invite (2) his good friend Zhao Huayang to watch it together. He gave him a call and told him to meet at the gate of Xinhua Park after class and then had dinner (3) together.
They met each other on time and had good dinner (4) in a restaurant. When the waiter brought them the bill. Ma Hu found that he left (5) his wallet at home. The two tickets kept (6) in the wallet, too.
(1)of在這裡不是表示所有關係，所以應把of改成for，表示“用途”。
(2)動詞invite在介詞of的後面，應把它變為–ing形式。
(3)連詞and連接的應該是兩個並列的動詞不定式，所以應把had改為to have。
(4)這裡注意dinner前面有形容詞修飾時，那麼應在形容詞前面加a。
(5)應把left改成had left。因為到“發現”時為止前面的動作已經完成，要用過去完成時態。
(6)此處是被動語態，應加上were。
【名師點評】
這是一篇根據漢語提示寫作的作文，也是中考題中常常採用的一種寫作方式。寫作中要求要點齊全，時態準確，短語、句型運用較為恰當即可得高分。本文要點齊全，較好地體現了寫作要求。只是文中細小錯誤較多，這會影響獲取高分。