洪江市黔陽一中高一（16）班 向麗君
There are a lot of conflicts between our parents and us. For example, when I surf the Internet in my spare time, Mom always shouts at me instead of comforting me. They are too nervous about my grades. In order to please them, I have to spend three hours doing my homework every day. What’s more, I have no chance to talk with them. I am too tired.
I really can”t stand. I want to say: I do know the best way to please parents is to devote ourselves to study. However, I also need my own way to relax myself. chatting on line is a way to relax myself especially when I was in low spirits. I hope they can give me more support and encouragement.
教師點評：
這篇作文，用簡潔的語言描述了自己與父母之間的小矛盾，同時，敘說了自己的一些想法，希望能得到父母的理解與支持。可以看出，作者作文工底紮實。能學以致用，許多短語都是牛津版高一模塊一才學的，例如： devote onself to (doing) sth.; the best way to do sth is to do等。同時，surf the internet; in one”s spare time;instead of doing; have no chance to do sth.; relax oneself; be in low spirits; give sb. more support and encouragement這些短語也用得恰當好處。其中，for example; in order to;what”s more這些連接詞也給文章增色不少。
教師簡介：
楊桂蓮，湖南省洪江市黔陽一中英語教師，中教一級。2004年畢業於中南大學英語專業。2008年獲全國中小學英語教師技能競賽二等獎。輔導學生參加全國英語奧林匹克競賽多次獲全國一、二等到獎；所寫論文4次獲湖南省二等獎，所製作課件多次獲湖南省二、三等獎。注重學生學習興趣的激發和培養，深受學生喜愛。
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